News Assignment
1. a. Michael R. Quinn.
b. Michael reconsidered his position.
c. Springfield University.
d. Friday.
e. Students protesting due to intution increase
2. a. Who, What, Where and Why
b. Who, What, Where and When
c. Who, What, Where and When
The best lead was the second one, it has all of the W's except why, but it has enough detail where I want to read more. It lags on being straightforward and it could be cut shorter but overall better than the other ones. I also liked the third one but they should wait to put the the details of how much it will benefit their paychecks futher in the story.
3. Students can register for class by phone beginning next semester.
4. University authorities found dynamite in freshman's dorm room yesterday afternoon during a univieristy wide inspection.
5. A fire destroyed a couple's home last night while homeowners we're away, it was believed to be from faulty electric wiring.
b. Michael reconsidered his position.
c. Springfield University.
d. Friday.
e. Students protesting due to intution increase
2. a. Who, What, Where and Why
b. Who, What, Where and When
c. Who, What, Where and When
The best lead was the second one, it has all of the W's except why, but it has enough detail where I want to read more. It lags on being straightforward and it could be cut shorter but overall better than the other ones. I also liked the third one but they should wait to put the the details of how much it will benefit their paychecks futher in the story.
3. Students can register for class by phone beginning next semester.
4. University authorities found dynamite in freshman's dorm room yesterday afternoon during a univieristy wide inspection.
5. A fire destroyed a couple's home last night while homeowners we're away, it was believed to be from faulty electric wiring.
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